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The Fight of the Ages: Chapter 5: The Winner

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-15-2014 2:03 PM

Prepare for an ACTION-packed chapter!!!!!! Who will be the winner!!! You shall soon find out! Ladies and Gentleman, the Ultimate Shodown, the TRUE Ultimate Showdown!!
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Chapter 5

Then, after a couple of seconds, Scarface and Rexy charged at each other.

 

They collided into each other, and both of them bumped their heads into each other harshly. Rexy actually fell onto the floor, and he felt the heat of the fire as his head was mere feet away from the fire. Scarface lunged at rex and did his best to harm Rexy by biting Rexy’s neck.

 

Rexy then managed to get loose of Scarface’s grip, and Rexy got up, and gave a little roar out of pain. Scarface roared, but Rexy took that to his advantage. Rexy charged at Scarface and bit as hard as he could the bottom portion of Scarface’s mouth. Scarface felt so much pain. HE tried to wiggle Rexy off, but he couldn’t. Rexy then let go. Scarface now wouldn’t be able to properly bite Rexy anymore.

 

Rexy then began to charge at Scarface again but Scarface lunged to the side, and when Rexy stopped charging, Scarface rammed his head into Rexy and pushed him again the fence.

 

The spikes were about half a foot long, and there was about 10 of them that went sinking into Rexy’s tough hide. The fire was burning his skin. Rexy roared in pain, but he realized that in order to get out of this and win, he would have to get his body out of the painful spikes’ grip. As he started to do so, Scarface stepped back and prepared to charge again.

 

Rexy, however, had different ideas.

 

Rexy got the spikes out of his body, and then stood there. Part of his side was burnt black and some 10 wounds showed where the spikes had got him. Scarface charged yet again, this time much faster.

 

With perfect timing, Rexy charged away from Scarface. Scarface’s head rammed against the fence. Rexy then wasted no time and Rexy charged at Scarface, ramming his head against Scarface’s side. Scarface roared in pain as his head was now caught free from the spikes, but quite painfully, because now the spikes were ripped out of his face, and now his body was against the fence.

 

The fire hurt Scarface in true anguish and suffering. His head didn’t get burnt into black, but he still had a reddish burn all over his face. A new scar.

 

But he wanted to keep this one. Scarface tried to get loose his body from the fiery spiked fence, but Rexy was still ramming his head against Scarface to keep him in place. Scarface was roaring louder and louder with each second, with tremendous pain. Rexy, however, didn’t want to win like this. Rexy, after a minute that seems like hours to Scarface, stepped backward and allowed Scarface to get himself out of the fence.

 

As Scarface got his body away from the fence, he stumbled. His whole left side of his body was burnt so bad that his black burns matched the pitch-black sky. Scarface also couldn’t see properly anymore. When his head had been rammed into the fence, a spike went into his left eye. His right eye was affected by the fire.

 

Scarface tried his best to pull himself together, and then he roared at Rexy, and he charged. Rexy was surprisingly caught off guard by this, so thus Rexy was knocked over. However, Rexy was knocked over in the middle of the clearing, so there was no fence to push him against. Scarface could also no longer properly bite anymore.

 

Scarface was confused. What was he going to do? He couldn’t bite, he couldn’t find a way anymore to ram Rexy into the fence, and there was really nothing he could do.

 

Rexy got up. He roared and then ran into Scarface, hurting Scarface, and then Rexy ran into Scarface, and Rexy went for Scarface’s neck. Rexy then grabbed Scarface’s neck with his mouth as hard as he could. Scarface could no longer roar properly, so little snorts of pain were being heard. Then Rexy pulled his head down, still grasping Scarface’ neck, and then Rexy lunged his head forward, snapping Scarface’s neck.

 

The simple snap of the neck was quiet, and among the constant noise of the flames flickering, it was heard only by Rexy and Cpt. K. Rexy then dropped Scarface’s lifeless body to the ground. Rexy then put his left foot atop Scarface’s head, and crushed it. As he did this, Rexy let out a roar so loud, it echoed around the arena a few times, and the fire surrounded Rexy, showing him as the victor.

 

Then, Rexy felt a pain in his brain. Rexy then started stumbling around. Rexy let out small roars of pain and fury. Then, he felt another pain in his heart. Then another in his brain. Rexy’s vision was now getting blurry, and he roared again. What was happening?

 

He couldn’t give up… He was the champion, he had to be… He then remembered Captain Paden K., one of the contenders. He looked around and saw him from the trees. At the same time Scarface’s body turned green and spilt into particles that flew into the night sky. HE made eye contact with Paden, and Paden looked back. Paden had in his hands a .50 sniper rifle.

 

With one cruel look, Paden shot at Rexy’s head again. Rexy then stood there, stupefied, and ten he fell over. Paden looked at Rexy’s now lifeless body. After a few moments, Rexy’s body evaporated into particles across the air. The same thing happened to Paden.

 

 

 

The only prize there was to be was the glory.

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Paden was then brought into a strange room. There in front of him stood a man. He had black hair, neatly combed. He wore black pants, and a black Jurassic Park T-Shirt. He also had a black Jurassic Park cap. He had hazel-brown eyes, and he even wore black shoes.

 

“Who are you?” Asked Paden.

 

“I am the game master.” Said the man.

“The one who started this whole thing?” Asked Paden.

The man gave a nod.

“So… what is my prize?” asked Paden, curiously.

“You already have it, you’ve had it the second you killed the big Rex.”

“What? What is it I have?”

“Glory. And respect.”

“I get the glory part… But from whom I am getting respect from!?”

“Me. You. The others… watching us…”

“Watching us?”

The strange man nodded.

“From where?” Asked Paden.

“All around. They know your thoughts, too.”

Paden stood there.

“Who are you really?” Asked Paden.

“People know me as different things. Some call me Kevin. Some call me Fernando. Some people call me… Raptor-401. Call me 401.” Said 401.

“Okay, 401, what happens next?” Asked Paden.

 

 

 

The man smiled.

 

 

 

 

“You face me.”

 

And in a matter of only seconds, they were transported into a new arena.

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PLEASE COMMENT!!!

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

13 Responses to The Fight of the Ages: Chapter 5: The Winner

Carnosaur

NoobMember0 XPJul-15-2014 2:07 PM

Interesting, sad to see Rexy go down but i liked it. Neat little cliff hanger as well

Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-15-2014 2:08 PM

Glad you liked it!!!
Dang it, forgot to make it my 2000th post... Oh well. Guess maybe the actual finale may be my 200th post.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

Hiphopananomus

NoobMember0 XPJul-15-2014 2:08 PM

Bit sad not see a dinosaur win but, still awesome.

"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"

"Jurassic park: The Lost World"

Lord Vader

LegendMember6270 XPJul-15-2014 2:28 PM

Nice job. Can't say I'm too surprised by the victor.

That's for the simple reason that he didn't actually fight until the bitter end. Rexy was almost dead to start, and then it was just a slaughter. Interesting to see all the fights, but I see that if you were written in early, you're f*cked. That's just my observation.

Here's a tip: Practice writing with multiple competitors. Say something fights in the middle, have it bide it's time for a bit and come back, not just fight fight fight, now it's dead. If you'd like, I can send you an example of a crap load of fighteres in one battle.

Just the same, this was a great, looking forward to seeing more of these if you do any more.

Jack of all trades. Master of none

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-15-2014 2:34 PM

Glad you enjoyed it. Sure go ahead and send me an example, but next time I do plan to do this fight differently.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

Lord Vader

LegendMember6270 XPJul-15-2014 2:37 PM

Thats good. Makes it seem a bit more fair that way. Looking forward to seeing it.

Jack of all trades. Master of none

JRR

NoobMember0 XPJul-15-2014 3:00 PM

great chapter raptor, quik question, is 401 an alter ego of yourselve?, or Raptor401 from your stories?

Evacuate?, Godzilla is just a Legend!-Woman in GMK

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-15-2014 3:19 PM

Raptor-401 as in me.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

x_paden_x

NoobMember0 XPJul-15-2014 4:22 PM

ooooooooooooooooooooooooh!

 

That cliff hanger.

 

Good job, I really enjoyed it. 

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

Gojira2K

NoobMember0 XPJul-15-2014 5:29 PM

Great job! And Great cliffhanger! Can't wait to see the next one.

"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-15-2014 10:37 PM

Thanks guys. The TRUE Final should be tomorrow, once I reach 2000 posts for real.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

Jezza

NoobMember1 XPJul-15-2014 11:06 PM

Well done 401, well done! :)

Youre fat, and I'm not sugarcoating it cause you'd probably eat that too.

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-16-2014 6:24 PM

Thanks everyone. ONE MORE POST TILL THE FINALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

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