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The Adventures of Tom: Chapter 4: A Chance to Regain Lost Glory

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-05-2014 11:12 AM

I hope you enjoy this chapter. It will be just a little short, but we get to see the plot take place.

THE ADVENTURES OF TOM: CHAPTER 4: A CHANCE TO REGAIN LOST GLORY

Gary woke up in bed. The boss was already standing beside the door. He turned around and made serious eye-contact with Gary.

“You have failed. I declare myself--- disappointed.” Said the boss, with cold hazel-green eyes.

Gary didn’t dare say a word, so he made eye-contact and nodded his head.

“Now, I am going to give you one more, and I mean ONE MORE chance. DO NOT fail me. Do you understand?” Asked the boss.

Gary understood that he was supposed to say yes verbally.

“Yes, sir.” Said Gary, with the most serious expression he could come up with in a scary matter of events.

“Now, here is my new mission. We need to bring Tom back, ALIVE. We need to interrogate him. Now, with the assistance of brand new equipment, we were able to analyze his memory. We now know under certain circumstances that it is a matter of only less than a week that Tom is going to die from a serious infection, so powerful it is fatal, no way to prevent it. He will die. We need to have him, because his DNA could be useful to us. With him we can see how we can create creatures like this on our own. With hybrid creatures we could become an unstoppable country. However, we need him alive so we can interrogate with him. We need him, here alive. Do. Not. Fuck. Up.” Said the boss.

The boss marched out of the room and shut the door behind him. Gary looked to the side to see he had clothes ready for his mission. There was also a paper lying with details he needed. He read over it. Gary knew that somewhere in the forest was Tom.

After 15 minutes, Gary walked outside, holding his backpack containing the materials he needed. He had his tranquilizer pistol ready. He got on his motorcycle and rode off the forest.

 

Gary thought of Tom. Was he really about to die? Did they really need him? Maybe he could help Tom, instead of knocking him out and bringing him upon the Area-401 officials… But then they were probably watching him, if he were to do that, he would certainly die a certain and painful death.

 

He then remembered that this Tom kid had killed Derek…

 

Yah, that’s what happened. He was just simply giving justice to a criminal. But then again, it was accidental… He couldn’t send someone to this fate if they did something wrong, I mean of course, Tom had days, hours before he would die…

 

Well.... If he was going to die... Then so be it.

Please comment if you enjoyed.

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JRR

MemberCompsognathusJul-05-2014 11:16 AM

i liked the story, actuall i expected tom to die

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Hiphopananomus

MemberCompsognathusJul-05-2014 11:18 AM

Awesome chapter!

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-05-2014 11:18 AM

If he does die it won't be so soon.

Thanks for enjoying!!!

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-05-2014 11:18 AM

Thanks Hiphopanamous!!!

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JRR

MemberCompsognathusJul-05-2014 11:21 AM

sugestion raptor, to make chapters longer describe their emotions and the enviorment, thats how they do it in many fanfics ive read

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-05-2014 11:22 AM

I don't want to make these things too long. And I think their emotions are described enough when necessary.

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JRR

MemberCompsognathusJul-05-2014 11:27 AM

what i meant is something like for example

when you say someone is very angry you could say 

''hisr eyes glowed in a strong color of red, almost as if they where made of fire''

instead of sayng

''he was bursting with furry''

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-05-2014 11:29 AM

Well I guess I could do it...

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DinoSteve93

MemberCompsognathusJul-05-2014 12:34 PM

Love this chapter, well done! :)

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-05-2014 12:59 PM

Thanks!!!

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Lord Vader

MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-05-2014 1:42 PM

Nice job. 

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-05-2014 1:44 PM

Thanks!

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Gojira2K

MemberCompsognathusJul-05-2014 6:24 PM

Great job!

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-05-2014 6:30 PM

Thanks Gojira!!!

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