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The Adventures of Tom: Chapter 2: Back at Area-401

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 9:54 AM

Okay, here is chapter 2. As I said, this part is much more "darker" than the last. HOpe you guys enjoy.

THE ADVENTURES OF TOM: CHAPTER 2: BACK AT AREA-401

Some miles away from Tom was Gary, walking back to Area-401. He felt dizzy, painful, and confused. His friend, well sort of, had just died, his hand was bitten off, and he had failed his mission, and had some losses. He knew he was in big trouble with the boss.

But right now was important to get medical treatment. After all, the only thing to stop him from bleeding was ripping off his shirt and wrapping it around his wound. He took off Derek’s shirt and wrapped it around his severed hand just in case somehow they would be able to put it back. Even if they weren’t able to, he’d still be able to get a full-action prosthetic hand. He then started thinking of a lot of things…

He remembered his father… That dirty old son of a b*tch he thought… same with his good-for-nothing mother… He could never forget…

How could he?

He was born May 4th, about 19 years ago…

His father had been with his mom. One day, his mom got pregnant. His dad told his mom to get rid of the baby. The mom concurred, and she happily went to a clinic, to just kill him.

He looked at his pocket, which contained respirator to help with his asthma.

He had barely survived the abortion. He was rescued by one of the nurses and treated carefully for the next few weeks. He grew up very happy… But then he accidentally found out about the truth…

Why had his parents not wanted him? He couldn’t help but to start crying. Once he found out about the truth. He was only about 14 at the time… He looked in the records…

His father and mother were named Joen and Robert. The names disgusted him. He went out to find them… To just let them know what pain they were causing him for the rest of his life… The fact that he was unwanted in this world before he was even brought into it…

The dad was already married to someone else. He went up to the house. The dad was covered in Tattoos and just like an immoral person, just worthless. Gary also saw that his dad was addicted to drugs. The dad was even smoking when he walked in. Gary straight up told him about who he was.

What the dad said next made Gary so mad that every time he just merely thought about it he felt like breaking something.

“Them dumb nurses failed their jobs, why when I get a hold of them- ” Said Robert before he was interrupted when he was getting repeatedly fist-punched by Gary.

Gary was yelling and calling his dad a bunch of cuss words, he was using all the words he knew at his father. Then Robert’s wife came in and started crying. He saw that the wife was abused by Robert.

He was distracted, he began to look at Robert’s wife. She looked like her life was ruined by Robert.

However, he made the mistake of looking away too long. His dad punched him in the face. The dad reached for a gun and was ready to shoot Tom, when the wife jumped at him, shouting “noo!!!” And then he started fighting with her. Tom reached for the chair next to him and hit Robert with it. For some reason, maybe it was from drug use and too much stress, his heart stopped, and Robert fell to the floor.

Robert’s wife looked at Gary in terror.

“I… I… I didn’t… I didn’t mean to kill him!!!!” Shouted Gary.

Gary had no idea what to do, so he just ran off, not even bothering to see his mom.

He became an outcast for a few years… Each day he hoped that he still had innocence inside him…

Eventually he was caught, but the police officer who was questioning him felt sorry for Gary, and offered him a new life, a new start… A fresh start…

He always lived with the fact that he killed someone… And today he was experiencing sort of the same feeling… What he thought had been a new beginning, was now an old never-ending ending…

He felt that he was responsible for the death of two people now… The last thing he had called Derek was an idiot…

He arrived at the front step of the building. The door opened, and they were ready to treat to his wounds.

The boss was there.

“I’ll ask questions later, but just tell me, results?” Asked the boss.

By results the boss asked what had happened.

“Levy dead, Tom escaped, Derek… Dead… and me wounded.” Said Gary lightly.

The boss rolled his eyes.

Gary felt a needle inserted in his arm, and he was now sleeping.

____________________________

Please leave a comment on how the story is going.

 

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45 Responses to The Adventures of Tom: Chapter 2: Back at Area-401

JRR

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 9:59 AM

THATS A PREETY GOOD CHAPTER RAPTOR HOPE YOU CONTINUE IT AND LOOKING FOWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 9:59 AM

I will continue it. I hope you're not yelling, though. Thanks.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

Lord Vader

LegendMember6270 XPJul-03-2014 10:00 AM

Nice job. Looking forward to the next. Robert had it coming.

Jack of all trades. Master of none

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 10:01 AM

Thank you, half-way done with chapter 3. And yes, yes he did.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

JRR

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 10:02 AM

im not yealing i forgot to turn the caps button

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Gojira2K

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 10:02 AM

I've already read this, so you know what I think.

"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 10:02 AM

Relax, it happened to me once.

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 10:02 AM

Well still glad you enjoyed it Gojira.

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Lord Vader

LegendMember6270 XPJul-03-2014 10:02 AM

Looking forward to that one. A word of advice; Have the whole story written before you start posting, then you can post around the same time everyday and not have to worry about delaying it halfway through.

Jack of all trades. Master of none

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 10:04 AM

Well, the reason why I do it like this is because I liek to see sometimes what people want to se happen in the story. In my first story, I was planning to kill off SPike, but too many people wnated him alive. SO I kept him alive.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

DinoSteve93

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 11:35 AM

Great chapter, I loved this one. Keep up the amazing work! ;)

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 11:36 AM

Thanks a lot Steve!!!

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DinoSteve93

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 11:39 AM

No problem Duffy Raptor! ;)

 

Hmmm.... booooldd....

 

Keep your horses Private 93, I know, bold's awesome. But don't interfer the topics anymore like you'd want to  steal the attention, okay?

Sure... hmm.....   boold....

*wisper* here we go again -_-

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 11:41 AM

We discuss war via PM...

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Lord Vader

LegendMember6270 XPJul-03-2014 11:42 AM

Someone discussing war without me? I oughta have you all assassinated. 

Jack of all trades. Master of none

DinoSteve93

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 11:42 AM

No need to war Duffy Raptor.

He's right, just give me booold

Yep, he's totally right.... wait what?

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 11:43 AM

Eh... You will never find me...

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 11:44 AM

I lead my own army. I still respect you, Major 9097.

But I lead my own army.

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DinoSteve93

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 11:45 AM

Sorry if I interfere with any war discussion, but I have something importante to say....

 

....

 

...bold....

 

mmmm...

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Lord Vader

LegendMember6270 XPJul-03-2014 11:46 AM

My army is still out there. Training. You won't see them coming. If you hear the shots, you weren't the target. 

Jack of all trades. Master of none

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 11:47 AM

I still respect you 9097. But you have no idea where I am. And my army is absolutely powerful.

And yes, the bold is amazing Private.

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Lord Vader

LegendMember6270 XPJul-03-2014 11:55 AM

If it isn't bulletproof, you're screwed like a horse in a glue factory. If it is, well, I've got stealth. 

Bold is f*cking awesome, you're welcome for not assassinating you for using it. 

Jack of all trades. Master of none

JRR

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 11:56 AM

raptor are the 3boys going to travel with tom or is he gona kill one of them accidentaly when he wakes up

Evacuate?, Godzilla is just a Legend!-Woman in GMK

JRR

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 12:01 PM

pssps-mr.happy i can sell you information about his location

Evacuate?, Godzilla is just a Legend!-Woman in GMK

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 12:01 PM

Hah, a true warrior doesn not reveal ANYTHING to the enemy, even if it means sacrificing himself!!!!

 

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 12:02 PM

All will be revealed soon catzilla. AND THERE YOU ARE

NOTHING TO DO HERE!!!

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Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 12:03 PM

Catzilla, you don't even know where I live. Only select trusted companions know my location.

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JRR

NoobMember0 XPJul-03-2014 12:04 PM

your bas is located in the desert of.........................................................

Evacuate?, Godzilla is just a Legend!-Woman in GMK

Raptor-401

2KMember3687 XPJul-03-2014 12:05 PM

Fool, I don't have my headquarters there. Arizona. Nowhere EVEN NERE  THERE. But I know where Dleta's army is located and before i have attacked it.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

Lord Vader

LegendMember6270 XPJul-03-2014 12:05 PM

Boom! IP address tracked. If you'd like to live, run and don't stop.

Jack of all trades. Master of none

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