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MemberAllosaurusApr-23-2014 5:04 PMNo proofreader again. Note that as I said before, the series would and will end abrubtly. This is just preparation for what's coming next. Please enjoy.
CHAPTER 8
Tom got worried. He ran back and began to look for Levy. He finally reached outside the forest. There was still no sight of Levy. He began to run forward. It was dark, but he could see the footsteps he left behind.
After half a minute of sprinting, he saw the two men over the body of Levy.
The two men were arguing, one was mad and yelling at the other, who was crying.
“Derek, how could you be SO f*cking stupid!? We were supposed to bring these things ALIVE, GOD DAMN IT!” Said Gary.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to kill it! I just meant to make him stop running!” Said Derek, crying.
Tom stood in the back, speechless.
Levy was…
“You’re just an idiot Derek, no wonder your father considered you a disgrace to the family! Now we have to go and find the other-“ Said Gary, before stopping.
Tom accidentally got to close to Gary and Derek and made eye contact with Derek.
Gary pulled out a tranquilizer pistol, but Tom thought it was a gun.
“Oh my God… they are going to kill me too…” Thought Tom.
Tom then jumped at Gary and bit his hand off, as an act of self-defense.
Derek pulled out a gun and fired at Tom’s leg, but missed.
Thomas jumped off and attacked Derek, accidentally killing him. Tom jumped off, realizing what he had just done.
He had just killed someone.
Gary was whimpering in pain, covering his wound with his shirt. He reached for his phone to call for back up.
Tom now didn’t even know what to do, so he just ran, crying. He turned into human form for some reason. He couldn’t believe all of this was happening. His creator who was basically like a father to him died, his love died, his best friend died, and now he just killed someone and injured someone.
He reached the forest. He found a tree near by some water to rest by. He made sure he was far far away.
Little did he know what was coming next.
THE END.
Please leave a reply on your thoughts about the ending!
Also, I know that he killed someone, but it was for self-defense, I mean what would YOU do?
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-23-2014 5:58 PMThat was abrupt. Well, nice ending anyway, looking forward to the next story.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-23-2014 6:16 PMWell be glad I gave you a warning. Thanks anyway.
UPDATE
I know that Tom just killed somebody, but as an act of self-defense!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-23-2014 6:18 PMI forgot about the warning. Keep in mind, I have the memory of a goldfish.
I have the memory of a goldfish.
I have the memory of a goldfish.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-23-2014 6:20 PMI see what you did there.
For some reason that comment gives me the urge to re-watch Finding Nemo...
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-23-2014 6:22 PMJust keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming.
Speaking of finding Nemo, remember that video you posted the link to that unnecessarily censored parts of Finding Nemo.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-23-2014 6:24 PMYah, I remember, I still re-watch every here and then XD
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-23-2014 6:25 PMIt's funny. Back to topic now. I'm out for the night though.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-23-2014 6:26 PMOh, well goodnight. His Frozen censored video is funny too.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusApr-23-2014 7:04 PMGreat chapter. Abrupt ending. Can't was for the next story.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-23-2014 7:07 PMYah, but I did warn everyome saying the ending was going to be abrupt.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusApr-23-2014 7:11 PMYes, yes you did.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
UCMP 118742
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 5:17 AMI liked it and I'm sure as hell looking forward to the next part.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
